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Agnes

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CHAPTER 13

Chapter 13 – The Fracture Line

The city was waking up, but the Emecheta estate remained cloaked in silence.

Chuka hadn’t slept. He paced the living room like a man rehearsing a confession—or a confrontation. The walls felt tighter now. The photographs heavier. The woman upstairs increasingly unfamiliar.

He looked at the portrait of Agnes by the staircase. The one she’d had commissioned after being named “Businesswoman of the Year” in CityScope Magazine.

He’d once believed her smile was genuine.

Now he wasn’t so sure.

Upstairs, Amaka wrapped a silk scarf around her hair and studied herself in the mirror. Again.

Every day she checked for cracks. But none had appeared.

The call came just before 8 a.m.

A familiar voice.

Musa.

“Moses is alive. He’s safe. He’s talking.”

Amaka said nothing.

“You tried to end this quietly, but I’m still here. Still watching. Still listening.”

She stared at her reflection.

“You’re good, Amaka. But you’re not untouchable.”

Then a click. Line dead.

She placed the phone down slowly.

Her heart did not race.

Uju was at the airport.

Backpack. Sunglasses. No makeup. No forwarding address.

She stared out the terminal windows as planes sliced through the sky.

Her phone buzzed. One new message.

Amaka:

“No matter where you go, you’ll always know. And that’s enough.”

Uju deleted the message.

Boarded her flight.

And cried the moment the wheels left the ground.

At the station, Musa took Moses’s official statement.

It was clean. Consistent. Detailed.

It was also useless—on its own.

He had motive, opportunity, even a confession of being used.

But no hard evidence tying Amaka to the actual act of poisoning.

No vial. No video. No voice recording.

She hadn’t needed to do it with her own hands.

She had done something far more dangerous:

She had orchestrated belief.

Back at the estate, Amaka found Chuka waiting for her in the sunroom.

“I made tea,” he said. “Figured we might actually need it this time.”

She sat without responding.

He poured into two cups. Steady hands.

“You look like her more every day.”

Amaka blinked. “You say that like it’s a curse.”

“It is. For me.”

A silence settled.

He leaned forward.

“Did you kill her?”

Amaka tilted her head. “Why ask if you’ve already made up your mind?”

“Because I need to hear it. From you.”

“I didn’t pour the poison,” she said.

“But you made it happen?”

“I ended a war that started before I could speak.”

“She gave you everything.”

“No,” Amaka replied, voice low. “She gave me nothing but chains dressed as diamonds.”

Chuka stared at her for a long moment.

“I want out.”

She didn’t blink. “Then go.”

“You’re not going to fight?”

“I don’t fight people who’ve already surrendered.”

He stood, took the untouched tea, and poured both cups down the sink.

When he left, she didn’t follow.

She simply exhaled.

And whispered, “One less loose thread.”

Musa reviewed the entire case file that night.

All 198 pages.

He rewrote his summary three times.

At the center of it all was a woman with no blood on her hands, but fingerprints on every detail.

A daughter who mourned on schedule.

A killer who never needed to touch the knife.

He closed the file.

Wrote a single word on the last page:

“Untouchable.”

Then locked it in the cabinet.

And walked out of the office.

The next morning, Amaka was announced on Good Morning Nigeria as the official Ambassador for Women’s Legacy Funds—an initiative she had lobbied for herself.

She gave an interview.

Warm.

Sincere.

Tearful at all the right moments.

She spoke about Agnes with reverence. About family. About forgiveness.

The host cried. The audience applauded.

By noon, the clip had gone viral.

Meanwhile, Moses disappeared again.

Voluntarily this time.

Left a note for Musa:

“She wins. I want to live. Please don’t find me.”

Musa read it twice.

Folded it once.

Then burned it over his office sink.

At dusk, Amaka stood before her mother’s grave.

She wore black again, not for mourning, but for clarity.

“I thought you would haunt me,” she said.

“But you don’t.”

She reached into her bag and placed a final item on the headstone: the same vial she’d handed to Moses weeks ago. Emptied. Cleaned. Useless.

Beside it, she set the last page of her private journal:

“To be born of a monster and become a mirror is not destiny. It’s design.”

She stepped back.

Lit a match.

Watched both burn.

And as the fire hissed against the wind, she smiled.

The past was ash.

And the future belonged only to her.

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