Agnes
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Chapter 16 – Agnes’s Shadow
The shards of the shattered mirror lay scattered across the marble floor like frozen screams.
Amaka stood above them, barefoot, motionless. One piece caught the light and reflected a sliver of her face—just the eye, framed by a spray of blood.
She had cut herself.
But she didn’t feel it.
Not yet.
At the State CID, Detective Musa clicked through the newly enhanced footage frame by frame.
In the final composite, two scenes aligned:
Frame 143: Amaka hands Moses a small paper bag.
Frame 211: Moses delivers the champagne to Agnes, alone, not part of the tray with the other drinks.
Frame 212: Amaka walks past the rear corridor—empty-handed—her eyes flickering toward her mother’s table.
Not direct evidence.
But damning choreography.
A story told without words.
Musa sat back in his chair, exhaled slowly.
He had seen killers with worse tells.
He had arrested women who wept more convincingly.
But he had never watched a murder played like a symphony.
Until now.
Uju’s flight landed in Accra, but she hadn’t told anyone—not even her sister.
She checked into a small boutique hotel, drew the curtains, and collapsed onto the bed without unpacking.
Her phone buzzed three times.
All messages from Nigerian numbers.
She ignored them.
But one caught her eye.
Unknown Number:
"You disappeared once. Don’t make it permanent. You still owe the truth."
She blocked the number.
But she didn’t delete the message.
Chuka sat across from the journalist at a quiet café near Ikeja GRA.
“I’m not sure I want to do this,” he said.
The journalist—a young woman with box braids and tired eyes—nodded. “You probably shouldn’t.”
“Then why did you call me?”
“Because your silence helps her story. And if the truth matters, someone has to ruin the ending.”
Chuka said nothing.
She slid a recorder across the table.
“Even off the record,” she said, “her version of events can’t be the only one left standing.”
Amaka sat in her late mother’s chair—Agnes’s infamous writing chair, the one reserved for letters, donations, and declarations—and reread the last few articles about her.
She was a star now.
A social icon. The “New Woman of Lagos.”
She was invited to speak at conferences. To cut ribbons at foundations she hadn’t funded. To sit on panels about grief, legacy, and female empowerment.
She was everything Agnes pretended to be.
But for how long?
She turned to Mama Tutu.
“Has anyone checked on the media team’s NDA renewals?”
“Yes, ma.”
“And the burner phones?”
“Destroyed.”
“The backups?”
“In the secondary vault.”
“Good.”
Pause.
“Send the driver. I want to go to the beach.”
Detective Musa drove alone to the shelter Moses had been hiding in before the first attempt on his life.
The place was mostly abandoned now.
But the caretaker handed him a note that had been left the week prior.
“If they find me again, I won’t run. I’ll disappear for good.”
Musa folded the note.
He didn’t know if Moses was bluffing—or already dead.
But one thing was clear: the longer Amaka stayed untouched, the more people faded in her shadow.
At Elegushi Beach, Amaka stood barefoot in the surf.
Not for a photoshoot.
Not for a performance.
Just her.
The waves lapped around her ankles like something ancient, whispering, pulling.
Her phone buzzed.
A message from her private number. One no one was meant to have.
“She wrote a final letter. Not the will. The one she hid from you. You missed it.”
Amaka read it twice.
The wind picked up.
She walked back to the car.
“Take me to the vault,” she said.
That night, she opened the secondary safe behind the piano wall.
It held Agnes’s journals, printouts, copies of transfers, notes, old campaign donations.
She sorted through them one by one.
Until she found an envelope taped behind the drawer.
Old. Yellowed. Unmarked.
She opened it.
Inside was a handwritten letter.
To her.
“Amaka, if you’re reading this, I’m already gone. You think you won. You didn’t. I made you exactly as I intended—efficient, feared, untouchable. But I never made you whole. That part, you needed to fight for. If you didn’t, then you’re already dead. Just like me.”
Her hand trembled for the first time in months.
Because for once, her mother hadn’t threatened her.
She had simply… known her.
Too well.