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Fractured

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CHAPTER 1

Fractured: Chapter 1 - 10:00 AM Sunday (The Awakening)

Kemi stirred awake, her eyelids heavy and her head throbbing with a relentless, sharp pain. The room around her was dimly lit, its sterile smell making her uneasy. A fluorescent bulb flickered above, casting erratic shadows across the small space. Panic surged through her as she tried to recall where she was—or even who she was. She struggled to sit up, her limbs weak, her mind clouded.

Kemi painfully awakens on a narrow bare bed, one elbow barely supporting her, one hand against her throbbing temple; heavy eyelids, weakness and panic. Flickering fluorescent light overhead casts hard broken shadows. Sterile gray windowless room.
Kemi stirred awake, her eyelids heavy and her head throbbing with a relentless, sharp pain. The room around her was dimly lit, its sterile s

Her heart raced, each beat thudding in her chest. She scanned the room, disoriented, trying to grasp onto any detail that would make sense. A metal chair sat in one corner, a plain table with a duffel bag on it in another. The walls were a muted gray, almost suffocating in their plainness. There was no window, no sign of where she could be.

she turns her head anxiously to inspect a gray windowless room. A simple metal chair occupies one corner, a plain table with one black duffel bag another. Claustrophobic unadorned walls and stark fluorescent ceiling light. Emphasize lonely geography and her disorientation.
Her heart raced, each beat thudding in her chest. She scanned the room, disoriented, trying to grasp onto any detail that would make sense.

"Who am I?" she whispered hoarsely, her throat dry.

Kemi whispers a frightened question about her own identity.
Kemi whispers a frightened question about her own identity.

Before she could dwell on her confusion, the sound of buzzing pulled her attention to a phone lying beside her on the bed. Its screen lit up with an unknown number. Without thinking, she picked it up, her hands trembling as she accepted the call.

Kemi reaches for a buzzing phone beside her on the bed.
Kemi reaches for a buzzing phone beside her on the bed.

"Hello?" she croaked.

Kemi answers the unknown caller with a hesitant greeting.
Kemi answers the unknown caller with a hesitant greeting.

The voice that answered was distorted, cold, and emotionless. “You’ve wasted enough time. Listen carefully. You have 24 hours to kill five people, or your husband and daughter die.”

Kemi listens in terror as the caller threatens her family.
Kemi listens in terror as the caller threatens her family.

Kemi froze, her breath hitching in her throat. "What—what are you talking about? I don't—"

Kemi freezes in disbelief at the impossible ultimatum.
Kemi freezes in disbelief at the impossible ultimatum.

"Your first target is Chike Nwosu. He'll be in the marketplace in two hours. Don’t waste time, Kemi. Time is ticking. If you don't act, your family dies."

Kemi is a small trapped figure on a narrow bed within the stark rectangular windowless room, phone to ear listening to instructions, the table and closed black duffel looming diagonally opposite. Her spine stiff, free hand gripping bedsheet, expression wary. A thin cold pool of fluorescent light isolates her. No market or target shown yet.
"Your first target is Chike Nwosu. He'll be in the marketplace in two hours. Don’t waste time, Kemi. Time is ticking. If you don't act, your

Kemi’s grip on the phone tightened. “I—I don’t understand. I don’t know—”

Kemi tightens her grip on the phone, unable to understand the caller.
Kemi tightens her grip on the phone, unable to understand the caller.

The voice cut her off, harsher this time. "No more questions. There’s a wallet with money and your ID on the table. Check the duffel bag. You know what you need to do."

The caller directs Kemi toward a wallet and duffel bag.
The caller directs Kemi toward a wallet and duffel bag.

The line went dead, and Kemi’s body trembled violently. Husband? Daughter? She had no memory of them—no memory of anything. Her heart pounded in her chest as she scanned the room again, her eyes landing on the table where the duffel bag sat. Slowly, she forced herself up, her legs shaky as she approached the bag. Her mind raced, trying to process the absurdity of it all.

Kemi forces herself up and approaches the duffel bag.
Kemi forces herself up and approaches the duffel bag.

With trembling hands, she unzipped the bag. A small, gleaming gun lay nestled among a few other items. She recoiled at the sight of it, bile rising in her throat.

Kemi recoils from the handgun hidden inside the bag.
Kemi recoils from the handgun hidden inside the bag.

"This can’t be real. It’s not real."

Kemi whispers in disbelief at what she has found.
Kemi whispers in disbelief at what she has found.

But the wallet on the table caught her attention. She opened it with trembling fingers, finding a driver’s license with her picture staring back at her. Kemi Adeoye. Lawyer. Lagos. The information felt foreign, as if she were reading about someone else. Nothing triggered recognition. She flipped through the bills in the wallet, her mind a storm of confusion and fear.

Kemi studies her own identification without recognizing herself.
Kemi studies her own identification without recognizing herself.

Her phone buzzed again. A single message.

Another message arrives on Kemi’s phone.
Another message arrives on Kemi’s phone.

23:57:13. The timer had started.

A relentless countdown begins on Kemi’s phone.
A relentless countdown begins on Kemi’s phone.

Panic surged through her veins. She stumbled to the door, her breath coming in ragged gasps. Opening it, she stepped out into the harsh daylight. The rundown streets of the city stretched out before her, dilapidated buildings and littered sidewalks. Strangers moved about their day, oblivious to her plight.

Kemi swallowed hard. The timer on her phone kept ticking. She had no choice. If her family was truly at stake, she had to comply—for now.

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